Planning my Second Scene

The next scene that I am going to be filming is the second box on the first line of my story board. This scene is all of the girls being in detention. The scene was originally going to a lesson, however I don't have enough people to take part in the scene in order to make it look like a lesson as it would look strange if their was going to be a lesson with only the four girls in the room, hence why I've made it look like detention as it makes more sense to only have the girls in the room and no one else.  I am going to film this scene during school time in a media lesson, as when I am in a lesson the 4 girls taking part in the scene are all going to be in frees or the media lesson with me meaning that they are going to be free to film. The classroom that I am going to be filming is isn't in a loud and noisy corridor meaning that there wont be lots of distractions occurring around the actors.

The three bullies are already going to be sat down together having their own conversation with Megan walking into the room after. While this occurs they are going to stop the conversation that they are in and watch her as she sits in front of them making her feel intimated as it will be a three against one situation. Hannah will then point at the fact that she wouldn't be in the classroom with them as she's not welcome. Emily will then comment on the fact that its her fault that she's the reason that they are all in the detention, however as Megan tries to talk they all talk over her and the bell rings. This leads to Megan leaving the room as soon as possible and the other girls picking up their bags all in sync and leaving together.

The first camera shot is going to be from the door of the classroom as they girls talking and looking at something on Hannah's phone, this will be a point of view shot almost as though someone is watching what the girls are doing. The shot will then changed to the corner of the classroom as Megan walks in quickly changing to face the girls in order to watch the reactions that they have on their faces. The rest of the scene of the girls talking will then be filmed from the side in order to get all of the girls in the scene. The scene will then cut to the bell ringing in order to show that the detention has finished.As soon as the bell goes the camera shot will go back to the girls and be a tracking shot of Megan walking out as soon as she can after the bell. The camera will the change back to the girls packing up their bags in sync and walking out together.

Following on from this scene will be the scene I filmed first of the girls being on the corridor talking about Megan with Aaron and Megan having a conversation.

Script:

All of the girls are going to be in conversation between themselves looking at things on Hannah's phone. As Megan walks in the all stop what they are doing and watch her as she sits down.

Hannah: Ew. Why is she here?!
Emily: Considering she's the reason that we are all sat here she's got oem confidence actually turning up.
Lilly: It wasn't actually all her fault that we are here, we never actually saw the person that set the alarms off we just got the blame for it.
Hannah: Yeah but don't forget that she's the reason that we were all standing next to the alarm.
Megan: I wasn't the one that made you do anything though, you all just blame me for everything? You know that if I could stop all of this from happening and stop all of the text messages I would, I'm on your side not against you.
Hannah: Are you sure?! We all know that you were the one that sent us the text it came from your phone....

Bell goes and Megan walks out as soon as she can

Emily: That's so typical she rushes off as soon as she starts to stand up to us.
Hannah: She just needs to leave this school already, as soon as she does everything will be so much easier and everything will go back to normal.
Lilly: It does sound like she is actually trying to be nice to us thought guys, we cant just blame her for everything that gone on when we don't actually know who it is ourselves.