Although the storyboard is clear and shows what I am trying to portray I wouldn't use the website again due to only being able to use a small about of story board spacing before having to pay which lead to me having to save what I had done and starting over. Which was very time consuming as I had to ensure all of the characters looked the same as the new storyboard started as I couldn't just copy and past them into the next box. Also I found the way that you saved the story board confusing which lead to me just print screening the page and cropping it down in order upload below, however this has meant that the writing it unable to be read.

- This scene is going to be a flash back from the end of the film. Hannah is dead on the floor with Lilly and Emily looking over her. Aaron who's in the hoodie in the background was the one to kill her however that will remain unknown. Megan who is also in the background the opposite side from Aaron is the reason that Hannah was killed. In order to make it clear this is a flashback I am going to add flashback lighting like I saw at the end of 'Pudding Bowl'.
- This scene is the three girls who are being represented as bulling Megan. During the scene the girls are going to be having a conversation as to why Megan is in there lesson and is trying to sit with them// being nice to them.
- There will be a small clip of the bell ringing in order to emphasis the fact that they are in high school and the lesson has finished.
- As the three girls get onto the corridor they are confused as to who Megan is talking to as they have never seen the person before (Aaron). Hannah makes it very clear that she thinks Megan is up to something and wants to know what it is.
- Lilly shows that Hannah should stop being so mean to Megan as she hasn't actually don't anything wrong to them. Hannah isn't happy about the fact that she being told what to do by someone else however Lilly has a point in the fact that Megan hasn't done anything wrong, so Hannah agrees and try's to follow Megan in order to talk to her. They also think they will be able to catch up with Aaron.
- As they walk around the corner they are confused as to where Aaron has gone however they continue you to follow Megan as there is no where else for her to escape to as she gets into the common room.
- The girls are confused as to where Megan has gone as she is not in the common room when they get in there however there is know where else that she could off gone without them seeing her leave.
- As the girls are about to leave the common room once again Hannah receives a text message which leave her looking confused// scared however she refuses to talk to the other girls about it before rushing to her next lesson.
- This scene will be a point of view shot, which will look although someone is watching Hannah's every movement however she is unaware that she is being watched.
- We will then see Megan pop up out of no where following Hannah as she leaves school, Megan is going to be warning Hannah not to follow what the text message she received says, Hannah then starts to question how Megan even knows about the text message as she hasn't told anyone about it. Hannah continues walking ignoring everything that Hannah has said to her.
- As a transition shot to show the difference in day and night time I am going to include a shot where a car comes speeding past, this will also look although Hannah has stepped into the road and a car has come at her as this will all happen so fast at the same time.
- This scene is going to be Hannah walking into the woods with Aaron following her, however she is unaware of the fact that Aaron is behind her. Every time that she looks behind her he isn't there however she knows that she is being followed so texts her friends for help.
- The scene carries on with Hannah walking into the middle of the woods. Aaron making a noise which makes her turn around, the camera shot is going to be of Hannah's reaction meaning you still wont see who Aaron is.
- Im then going to add a long shot of the woods with a sound effect of a scream, followed by a gunshot.
- This scene is going to be repeat of what the first scene showed with Hannah dead on the floor, as the other girls receive the rear message Aaron is going to be shown in the shot without a phone in his hand showing how there is more than one person targeting them.




You have clearly put a lot of thought into your idea and have set your idea out clearly. The challenge is in realising such an idea, putting it on screen in a way that is inventive and holds the audience's attention.
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