The fifth scene is going to be the last scene of my short film which means that the film has to come to a conclusion, due to the film being mystery many of the things that have occurred throughout the film need to have a brief explanation as to why they occurred. The scene is going to carry on from the last part of my story board to show the shocked expression on Hannah's face as she turns around and sees Aaron however the audience still wont see who he is as this will remain a mystery.
Following from this I will show a long shot of the woods with a scream and gun shot sound put over the top which will allow the audience to understand that the person who was following Hannah and talking to Megan has killed her.
The last scene that I am going to be filming is going to be show at the very start of my short film also with flashback lighting added onto it also. Hannah is going to be lying on the floor dead with Lilly and Emily looking over. I was going to have Megan in the background of the scene however I'm going to have her text the two girls saying 'I tried to stop her....I tried to stop him from hurting her'. I was also going to have the girls receive another text message with Aaron being in the back without a phone in his hand, however this would become very confusing for the audience very quickly as it may not have been as clear as I have thought it to be.
Script:
Emily: This wasn't....
Lilly: She hates us but would never go this far
Text message
I then want the scene to zoom out and come to end with the text message dissolving off the screen.
Raveena, you are working really hard on the planning and research for this, and are going into lots of detail. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mr Swain Raveena!
ReplyDeleteNS: What I would also like to see is images in your blog - clips of short films that you have analysed, pictures of where you will be filming, pictures of your talent, a call sheet, film posters that you have analysed or you find them inspirational, etc., so that your blog isn't just writing.